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CorrosiveEye

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Wow! I like. Nice and chill. Enjoyable.

Jahn33 responds:

Thanks!

This song is awesome dude.

If you're having trouble finishing songs, just do small parts of it each day from start to finish.

DetiousMusic responds:

Unfortunately my computer broke so I lost the project /:

That's some nice dubsteps you got there :D

Finish a song please :)

DetiousMusic responds:

I know dude ): I can never finish any tracks.

It sounds really good Merpy

Pan some of the instruments dude, it'll sound really good, I promise you :)

Merpy responds:

Thanks for the tip! :D

Beautiful :)

Don't you think the music that plays while switching radio stations have too much reverb? I think If you held off the reverb until the actual song starts, it could have a nice effect . notbad.jpg

Personally I'm not a big fan of the "acid" presets on Sytrus. But it sounded nice with the other instruments in your songs.

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Rinibra responds:

Thank you so much! : ) The second "glitchy" song I used for the radio station effect was an "experiment" song. I was using a bunch of different effects that I wasn't quite familiar with yet, such as reverb. I'll be sure to watch that next time. Thank you again!

Awesome build-up starting at 1:16. Pissed my pants there. Alternate reality type shit maaaan.

Could have been a bigger drop at 1:31 to give a sense of satisfaction or something.

Your To-Do list (lol)

- stereo imaging - pan instruments to a certain side (give each instrument it's own space in the "Left-Right Continuum"

- Raise levels on your low end. (Place a parametric equalizer on the master channel (or just your bass) and raise the left most bar until it sounds good.) Also, look up some information about mixing. Your songs will come out a lot better.

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Ditchy responds:

Love the advice mate. As always :)

I loved the intro and how it faded into the beeps and stuff (seamless just the way I like it :))

I could hear the bell from a certain Sytrus preset channeled through the Gross Beat xD It was pretty nice though I gotta admit.

AWWW SHEEEET I didn't even realize the song looped while writing this review.

I'm dancing, you're rockin, you get all my starz dood.

Perfect for ANY LEVEL in ANY GAME! GET IT NOWWWWW! DOWNLOAD NOWWW! (and rate of course hehe)

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ganon95 responds:

the sytrus bit was actually done by accident lol it sounded cool so i left it in. glad u liked it :)

Nice fun song. Appropriate title :)

-Critiques-

Drums were repetitive. I assume you were experimenting but I think you should polish your songs before uploading to NG. So add more variety to the drum riffs (breakdowns, variations to drum riffs)

I see you many several melodies in this song. All you really need to do is take one melody and make variations of it and play them at different parts of the song. You can add a second melody but that's pretty much all you really need.

-Good Stuff-

This song just sounds nice.

The drums WERE plain but you CAN use those to make awesome drum riffs. Good selection tbh, it has a lot of potential. I think you should reuse them in another song using my critiques above.

3.5/5

Keep working hard :) and to answer your question, yes a G major scale with the root D is D mixolydian. From D to C in the key of Gmajor, going up, is whole-whole-half-whole-whole-half.

If you have any questions you can PM me.

Merpy responds:

thanks dude

Wonderful song Herdunculus.

-Critiques-

I think you should use some stereo imaging on some instruments. Pan things here and there. All the instruments seem to be coming from the center.

Maybe add some delay on link's voice?

Kicks don't seem to have any punch. Maybe some compression and EQ would help out.

Your snare could use some more "body" frequencies.

I would personally raise some of the higher frequencies on the lead synth in the beginning.

The build up around link's voice could use more build up elements so that it feels MORE built up. When the song drops after link's voice it would feel more satisfying(?)

-Good Stuff-

I like the distorted wobble synth

Song had me rocking my head the whole time.

I like the bass and all the reverb on it :)

I REALLY like the little synth with all that reverb on it playing in the backround that started around the 0:40. I don't know if it's a piano or not I can't really put my finger on it. Anyway, good choice.

Great song 5/5

Herdunculus responds:

Duuude thanks for such a helpful review! I probably won't go back and change the song, since it was meant to be something done a little quickly. BUT this is extraordinary information for any future tracks I will make. Thanks a lot man :D

Actually, I thought this was pretty good. Your voices actually sounded like different people.

I noticed that your words and sentences have a constant rhythm to them (I don't know what it's called). You could make it more varied. Holding out consonants, vowels and things of that nature. "Well Aallright then."

Personally, following this advice would make it better for me. I'm no voice actor, but I hope I helped.

DietingNinja responds:

Thank you for the feedback, CorrosiveEyes; your advice is most certainly helpful!

I think the reason why I think everything seems to be done so quickly is because in order to make an effective demo reel you have to be able to fit in as many different voices as you possibly can, but my approach here is kind of dialogue heavy (with the same voices having more lines than usual) so the opportunity to switch it up wasn't really available to me without bogging down the overall pace of it.

However, I can most certainly see where you're coming from and I'll definitely keep that in mind when I start working on my demo for 2013!

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